Wednesday, 16 May 2012

16th May 2012 The Map - My occasional fiction story

May 16
Two tired faces in a compartment of a train. The old man lost in the many stations of his life past; the young woman lost in the maze of the provisory future.

A sudden jolt of the convoy brought their errant looks to briefly cross each other. Deep in jumbled private thoughts, it took a few seconds before both noted that they are walking on life's path entangled. The many accumulated years of his and the few years of hers both claimed to return to their individual space. Her face so young, smooth and fresh, seemed to smell of perfumed soap; and his was like a lined and creased treasure map with aroma of wood and rum.

He took a second glimpse at the young woman and felt himself slipping from that clean forehead all the way down the smooth checks like gliding in the snow; and she ran down the hundreds of tiny footpaths and imagined the countless trails of all sorts, each leading to something new and different bestowed by life.

Another jostle of the wagon woke them from each's construction of the other's life. With self consciousness, or something like an apology for the silent intrusion, they exchanged sort of an acknowledgement, sort of a Goodbye, half like a Good-luck, then they both let go of their imagination. They didn't look at each other again for the rest of the journey.

They never saw each other again. With the past of years, the old man will die. The young woman would substitute smell of the perfumed soap with the gradually thickening aroma of wood and rum. One day, two tired faces will meet in a train, he, an adolescent with fresh and smooth skin, carefree and innocent and she, an old lady.with wrinkled up face like a creased map. She finally understood and quietly smiled at the boy.

It's the Slide, the helter-skelter, disorderly side of an orderly life.

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